President Mubarak resigns
- Being a person who loves to watch the news, I was in front of my television when the news broke that President Mubarak resigned. I was watching network news and I began to wonder how other news sources were covering this historic event. So, I set out to explore publications I don’t look at or read on a daily basis. I thought it was interesting to see how their coverage differed. With an event such as this one, I expected the news coverage to be pretty much the standard hard news lede followed by some important details: where, when, why, how.
The hard news lede is what I found when I went to the “Huffington Post’s” website and read their coverage of the event. Here’s the lede:
Egypt’s Hosni Mubarak resigned as president and handed control to the military on Friday, bowing down after a historic 18-day wave of pro-democracy demonstrations by hundreds of thousands.
That covers the basic facts: President Mubarak stepped down as a result of anti-government protests. Basic, and straight to the point. I like this kind of lede because I don’t have to read through a lot of fluff to get to the good stuff. I know what happened and why by the time I get to the end of the first sentence.
“The New Yorker” had a different kind of lede to their coverage (which I would expect, given it’s a news magazine). Here’s how they did it:
Who is president of Egypt? Not Hosni Mubarak, as of a few minutes ago.
That’s catchy. It’s different and definitely grabs my attention, but I still know the very basic fact: Mubarak resigned. Because the first sentence is attention-grabbing, I want to know more. So, I read further to discover the speech Mubarak gave last night didn’t satisfy the people. But the article also asks who will step up to power now that Mubarak is gone? This piece is written less like hard news, like the article from the “Huffington Post,” but it still allows the reader to understand the basic information and leaves the reader wondering what will happen next.
The third place I went for Mubarak resignation coverage was the “National Review Online.” The thing I especially liked about this was the lede was the headline. And the headline was a question that was answered in the first line of the story. Here’s the headline:
What Will the Military Do Next? Sack the Cabinet?
The NRO answered the question but told its readers to “take it with a grain of salt.” It then quoted preliminary reports speculating what will happen next. So, rather than telling the readers the backstory including protests and riots, the NRO looked ahead and asked its readers what they think will happen next, and they provided one prediction. I like this style because it’s something different. When I get to their coverage, I don’t have to sift through a lot of detail about protests that I already know about, and instead I can start thinking about what might happen in the coming days and weeks.
Finally, I looked at the coverage “The Washington Times” provided its readers. It followed the hard news lede template that the “Huffington Post” used. Here’s the lede:
Egypt‘s Hosni Mubarak resigned as president and handed control to the military on Friday after 29 years in power, bowing to a historic 18-day wave of pro-democracy demonstrations by hundreds of thousands.
Again, it gives the same basic information while providing context to the readers. I don’t have anything against hard news ledes, they work for stories like this. But, it doesn’t give me anything different from other publications or television reports I see. Still good, though.
I like to explore the vast world of journalism on big news days such as today because it gives me a chance to get all the facts I can gather and make sense of them myself. I could have gone to just one source today to get the information about President Mubarak. Instead, though I went to four different sources (five, if you count the television coverage I saw when the story broke), and gathered different tidbits of information that I couldn’t get in just one story. It’s fascinating to see how different minds work when writing a lede sentence. Looking at how other reporters write their ledes helps me think about how I would structure my own lede if I were to write a story on this subject. I think I would try and go for a lede that draws readers in to my story, but also one that gives fact. I like “The New Yorker’s” lede the best, I’d probably want to use something like that.